I will be honest the first concept was much stronger. And again I agree with the above about layout ^
Also seeing how the brand would be applied to stationary etc would be good : )
Welcome! I like the colour choice but feel it would be strongest without the gradient.
Maybe reduce the type a touch and place it centrally below the mark...
i reckon this would look best on a plain white b/g with the icon in 100% black.
Lets maybe see a strong font to go with it and the mark reduced by 30%. Good luck
this one has potential.. think about more unique colours and backgrounds. Try modern design elements like subtle gradients/transparencies. A cleaner script font that flows better would work... or if in doubt a clean san serif font is the way to go : )
good one mate! Congrats